Can you reading my letter,if I has high English skill,I would write to you in English. It was almost nothing to do on my night shift,but must stay there all night.Your telephone number had saved by me. My nabs,I regard you as my elder brother.总在关心着我,小弟在这里有礼了,就不说什么“谢”了。请高人看看这段英语有什么错误,另,最后两句我不知道如何翻译了
总在关心着我,allways take care of me小弟在这里有礼了,就不说什么“谢”了。
你这两句就是瞎掰,有礼了,不说谢了,你麻烦不?直接thank for his care 不就行了。
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我象兄长一般敬重你
我亲爱的金山
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i can do it
它翻译成
我在开罐子