就是下面这一段:
企业资源计划(ERP)系统是一套统筹管理企业内部所有部门的集成式信息系统。它脱胎自制造资源管理系统 (MRP),优点是打破了旧有的只为个别客户或应用需要而编写的专用软件的限制,提供一套可以自由选配的组合式软件。除了传统MRPⅡ系统的制造、财务、销售等功能外,还增加了分销管理、人力资源管理、运输管理、仓库管理、质量管理、设备管理、决策支持等功能,其主要宗旨就是将企业各方面的资源充分调配和平衡,使企业在激烈的市场竞争中全方位地发挥足够的能力,从而取得更好的经济效益。
当然,由于本系统的开发的对象是一个小型企业,所以就只设计了ERP系统里的某些功能,设计有财务、销售、分销管理、人力资源管理、仓库管理等等功能。
本系统采用DELPHI做为开发语言,SQL SERVER做为后台管理数据库。本系统采取客户机/服务器结构(C/S结构)。
企业资源计划(ERP)系统是一套统筹管理企业内部所有部门的集成式信息系统。它脱胎自制造资源管理系统 (MRP),优点是打破了旧有的只为个别客户或应用需要而编写的专用软件的限制,提供一套可以自由选配的组合式软件。除了传统MRPⅡ系统的制造、财务、销售等功能外,还增加了分销管理、人力资源管理、运输管理、仓库管理、质量管理、设备管理、决策支持等功能,其主要宗旨就是将企业各方面的资源充分调配和平衡,使企业在激烈的市场竞争中全方位地发挥足够的能力,从而取得更好的经济效益。
当然,由于本系统的开发的对象是一个小型企业,所以就只设计了ERP系统里的某些功能,设计有财务、销售、分销管理、人力资源管理、仓库管理等等功能。
本系统采用DELPHI做为开发语言,SQL SERVER做为后台管理数据库。本系统采取客户机/服务器结构(C/S结构)。
Certainly, because of the object of the development of this system is some functions that a small scaled business enterprise, so designed the system of ERP only in, the design have the finance, sale, retail the management, human resource management, warehouse management etc. function.
This system adoption DELPHI is used as to develop the language, the SQL SERVER is used as the backstage management database.This system adopts customer's machine/ server construction.( C/ the construction of S)
哎其实老师也不会看那么仔细,我去年就是乱搞的!
As this system is only for a small company, some of the ERP functions are excluded from the system, what remains is financial affairs management, eting management, distributed eting management , human resources management , warehouse management and so on.
The system adopt Delphi as developing language, SQL server is the back-stage database supporting system, in addition, this system adopts the c/s(client/server)
structure。楼主看看,什么地方需要改动!
1,分销管理:distribution management
2, Except for the functions ,改为Besides the functions
3,The system is developed by delphi language and sql server is the back-end database supporting system!
5,gain more ecnomic benefits --------gain is better
6,ERP , by making full use of the resources in an enterprise and balancing the distribution, aims to help an enterprise to stand more chance in the fierce et competition, thus make more economic benefits
改为:
ERP aims to coordinate and balance the resources in all departments within the enterprises and fully exert the enterprise competence in the fierce et competition to gain more economic benefits.
7,
As this system is only for a small company, some of the ERP functions are excluded from the system, what remains is
改为:
As this system is designed for small companies,some of the ERP functions have been excluded from it,what remains is.......
8。it outgrows the old limitation that a set of software is only for special client or concrete application to use. 改为:it eliminates the old limitation
专门的客户:specific client9.by providing a set of integrated software you can choose freely,
改为:
by providing s set of integrated components you can choose freely
components is better
10,financial affairs management 改为finance management好了,该结贴了:)